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I feel kinda bad that Scribbathlon 2 is only having three winners. I had no idea thirty-three people were going to enter. Well, at least I have a good incentive to do this again some time in the future. :)
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Roses are red; blood is red too.

I don't like blood, and neither do you.

 

It's not fun hearing people scream,

But they were in the way of my dream.

 

My alcoholic mother drank her life away;

My father decided to abandon me the next day.

 

Nobody would adopt a creepy little girl

Who spent her time talking to a squirrel.

 

Nobody else would listen to my nightmares;

Everybody else was unsettled by my cares.

 

Then came your family, and with them, you as well;

You offered me a chance to escape my personal Hell.

 

Even though almost everyone I've told hasn't believed me,

Mother's lifeless, liquor-lipped corpse is something I still see.

 

I know that no one else sees father walking away from her;

I've always been alone in seeing them, which I used to prefer.

 

I felt that way until the time you smiled and said:

"Let your life be ruled by you, not the dead."

 

You suggested my mother switch to root beer;

You called my father a coward who left me in fear.

 

When your family adopted me, I was given hope;

I thought, just once, I could do more than mope.

 

Your parents just had to believe that siblings shouldn't date.

We don't share any blood, and I'm sure our meeting was fate.

 

Your parents thought a psychiatrist was going to help;

They saw me as helpless, like some tiny, lost whelp.

 

When the medicine took effect, Mother and Father were gone,

At least, until the pills wore off in the wee hours of dawn.

 

You started spending less time with me, which earned you praise

For "branching out", having fun with new friends in new ways.

 

That's when I realized I was adopted to be your plaything;

Your parents knew what good having a friend would bring.

 

You were out of your shell, so I was no longer needed;

I'm sure a cry of "I love you" would've gone unheeded.

 

Fortunately, I came up with a much better, more thorough plan.

The ones who tried to separate us are gone, my fated man.

 

Now you can see their ghosts and we can be closer than before,

But first, please stop crying over the bodies on the floor.

 

Just as you helped me heal, for you I'll gladly do the same;

It's a well-earned thanks for bringing me into your family name.

Would You Stay With Me?
It's as last minute as a person can get, but I did a poem for :iconthewriteplace:'s prompt of obsession!

With obsession, I chose to write about a troubled girl who finds a young man she views as an angel. When things don't quite go as she intended, she tries to, shall we say, put things back on what she sees as their intended course. ;P

I've always wanted to write about a yandere for some reason, so getting to was fun. x'D
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I would like to apologize for my sudden disappearance. I went to visit my aunt this weekend, not knowing that she wouldn't have wi-fi, which is why I fell off the map. It stinks that had to happen with how Friday went, but that's okay.

I actually needed this to happen. At first I completely fell apart; I was scared that my good fortune would all be gone when I got back, that I had blown my brief moment of success. I needed to feel that, because I needed to realize that fearing the worst is not helping me. I have to accept things that I didn't expect to happen and realize they aren't the end of the world. I can keep smiling, not beat myself up, and look forward to my next opportunity to be with you all. :)

-Scribe
  • Listening to: Mega Man X7 OST
  • Reading: Victorian Literature Reading Assignments
  • Watching: Azumanga Daioh
  • Playing: Mario Party 10
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I would like to apologize for my sudden disappearance. I went to visit my aunt this weekend, not knowing that she wouldn't have wi-fi, which is why I fell off the map. It stinks that had to happen with how Friday went, but that's okay.

I actually needed this to happen. At first I completely fell apart; I was scared that my good fortune would all be gone when I got back, that I had blown my brief moment of success. I needed to feel that, because I needed to realize that fearing the worst is not helping me. I have to accept things that I didn't expect to happen and realize they aren't the end of the world. I can keep smiling, not beat myself up, and look forward to my next opportunity to be with you all. :)

-Scribe
  • Listening to: Mega Man X7 OST
  • Reading: Victorian Literature Reading Assignments
  • Watching: Azumanga Daioh
  • Playing: Mario Party 10

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Hello everybody! I actually finally am updating this for the first time in over a year! ^^;
This is Scribe, and coming up soon will be an updated personal bio. :)
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elextrified Featured By Owner 4 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much for the watch hun! Your support is so appreciated!! :huggle: :heart:
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner 2 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
Your support is equally appreciated! >w< 
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Thanks for favoriting.
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rhunel Featured By Owner 11 hours ago   General Artist
Thanks for the poetry fave, it means a lot! Have a blessed day! -Debra
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner 7 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
You're most welcome~
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Arts1000 Featured By Owner 12 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch! OwO
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner 12 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! ^w^
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Nexubis Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait a second...I wasn't watching you?! :0 Anyway fixed that, and I am working on a little sketch of your two lovely OCs c: Sorry it is taking so long!
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
D'awww, thankies! ;W;
And not a problem at all! I am soooo excited to see! :dummy:
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