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I Love You Anyway

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Stop thinking you can never fail;

It deprived you of your smile.

Why is your self-esteem so frail?

What have you done that's so vile?

 

So you got mad at somebody;

Stop thinking you can never fail.

Emotions don't make you shoddy;

Please cast off your self-loathing veil.

 

You want to cry? Go ahead, wail!

Your tears have been locked up too long!

Stop thinking you can never fail!

You say it makes you weak? You're wrong!

 

I'm sorry. I just wish you'd see

That being human does entail

Mistake after mistake, so please

Stop thinking you can never fail. 

I hope today is the start of me finally overcoming the struggles that I've been facing for such a long time. I want to move on and cherish what life has to offer; here's to this poem being the start of that.

It's an Empat Empat (that's fun to say :P). The Empat Empat form is a Malaysian form that features refrains and rhymes.It consists of four quatrains with a staircase refrain of the first line embedded. Syllabic count can be 4, 8, or 10 per line, so it is up to you.  The rhyme scheme is Abab cAca adAd eaeA. I chose to write about a person dealing with crippling self-esteem issues. A dear friend calls out to them to accept their imperfections, which is where this quote comes in:

"You don't love someone because they're perfect, you love them in spite of the fact that they're not." - Jodi Picoult, My Sister's Keeper

This poem is for both :iconprojectdfc:'s February Form Fiesta 2017 and :iconmy-soul-bleeds-ink:'s Valentine's Contest.

February Form Fiesta 2017 in #ProjectDFC!Welcome back!
Hi everyone :). Welcome back to another February Form Fiesta! Talk about a crazy start to 2017 amirite? Political unrest, insane weather and emotions soaring high as we endeavour to find some common or stable ground. While this is not going to be a political post, because we have plenty of political posts online, I just want to turn your collective attentions to a new show on Netflix called One Day At A Time. It's a revamp of the old classic, except with a Cuban-American family. It is fricken brilliant and I hope these gifs inspire you to binge on it. I have watched the season three times already and still can't get enough. I NEED MORE!
Anywho, let's get on with the show.
 
A Brief History of FFF...
As you may be aware, ProjectDFC has been running since 2009, with February Form Fiesta our first official ProjectDFC contest. It features five different forms for your writing pleasure, meant to inspire and challenge you. You can choose t


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It felt really good, getting this in just before the deadline. I think this is what I needed to spark the start of a turnaround. :) 
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HopefulZero's avatar
Great message in a well-written poem. The rhyme scheme really works here; it naturally carries the message without feeling forced. Wonderful work. Clap